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The cherry-blossom petals get rid of the -
are falling like tears
into my hair.
This is not just
some lovers' tryst
in a world of Snow Whites,
with the fear-hungry birds i don't thik you need a - just leave it fear hungry
coming so close
we could almost
clip their wings
were we not
the ones in flight.
No this,
this is
the catalyst
of all my stubborn values,
this is
snow-globe confinement no --
in which I can breathe,
petals swirling,
sun approaching,
no sweet nothings,[b] inversion?
just
picturesque reality
other than those couple of things i thought it was good and, well just good
keep trying
and remember never give up you can do it
---Jon---
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